Monday 17 June 2013

A Journey to an Imaginary World (Passing Earth on the Way!)

Class LP and PC have been writing about an adventure into space as part of our mini-topic 'Journey to an Imaginary World'.

This has involved writing about a journey to one of our imaginary planets. We worked with a talking partner to describe what the view of Earth would be like from a space rocket window at the begining of our journey.

Mrs Ponter was extremely impressed with the ideas we came up with. Why not take a look, you are sure to be impressed too...

Earth

Earth spins as fast as an Olympic swimmer, it touches the twinkling stars and it twirls into the darkness of the black sky. Earth is as round as a giant sphere. The blue, green and white planet is very colourful. Earth is as big as Venus.

By Sophie W.

                              
View of planet Earth
Through the window I can see the lifeless amazing sparkly and shiny Moon showing the fantastic reflection of the fiery and icy Earth. As I stare at the surface off the icy planet, I feel amazed.
Billions of chunks are desperate to explode out of the green, blue and brown Earth all around the solar system.
By Alec and Jack.

View of planet Earth
This enormous planet looks like it’s going to explode into the dark misty black sky, there is white, misty and glowing clouds surrounding the big and round planet. Also there is light blue sea with beautiful creatures in. It looks fantastic from above. When it is dark the moon shines as bright as the sunny sun.
The moon sparkles in the light.
By Erin and Chloe

My view of Earth

Suddenly I looked out of my window I was astonished to see all of the wonderful planets like the moon and the beautiful colours. The Earth is as round as a football. Slowly, the Earth spins and spins and never stops. The black dark background surrounds the gloomy green Earth.
The Earth, which is blue ,green and white, turns and turns. Beautiful glimmering, golden and greenly Earth stands out in the black gloomy sky. The gloomy, green and magical Earth is as round as a marble and as huge as a giant. White mist rapidly wraps its arms around Earth.
By Lucy and Dylan.


My view of Earth

Beautiful sky blue, grassy green and snowy white swirls. The minute Earth rapidly twirls around in different directions like a ballerina doing pirouettes. The huge, colourful planet lights up the night sky like a bright torch glowing. The dazzling earth flies in the dark sky like a floating sphere.  This planet is really round like a football, it glimmers in the sun light.
By Emily and Jasmine.
                            
Earth

The gigantic and amazing planet Earth has white mist floating around; its colours are blue, brown and green.
When you are in space the dark side is the side you can see, because the Earth rotates around slowly.

 

When you are looking out of your small crooked window you can see twinkling shining stars.
                       By Mark and Isaac B.

 
View of planet Earth
The Earth is like a blue and white swiftly moving gobstopper in the air. The big round planet looks like it has overflowed with water. The Earth can orbit the beautiful sun and has millions of cities.
Jodie and Dion


View of planet Earth
Beautiful blue sea dazzles below the white fluffy marshmallow looking clouds that move across the shiny blue sky as slow as a snail.
Silently the green, green grass and the shimmering water what looks like shattered blue diamonds.
Franticly the miniscule Earth rotates quickly around the bewildering midnight black space.
Frosty, cold and glittery white countries shine as bright as the scorching, blinding sun.
Darkness creeps over the sphere royal blue Earth which is only just translucent through the creepy darkness which raps its arms around me.
At the speed of light, the boiling bright yellow sun shares its heat with the midget planets.
By Paul and Nic.


Earth view

Beautifully, the giant Earth swirls around in the huge solar system, while being surrounded by enormous clouds which, are like fluffy snowballs.
The Earth, which is blue, green and white, stands alone in the dark.
Earth is like a marble, the loveliest marble in the world.
The Earth’s colours are as vibrant as can be; they immediately catch your eyes.

By Ellie and Nathan.



Planet Earth
This amazing looking planet with a beautiful sapphire blue sea glistens on the round, huge and cloudy Earth.  The small, colourful, spinning and marble like ball is so big I can’t fit my hands around it. Rapidly the blue, green, white and brown Earth swiftly spins round the boiling, hot, fiery, scorching, blazing and roasting Sun, whilst reaching the sparkling and shining stars.  
                         By Isaac.M and Harvey.